tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-160907056447793603.post2766301834291873450..comments2023-11-15T04:03:13.741+00:00Comments on Crime Scene NI: Stuff I've DoneGerard Brennanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18301381067485712366noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-160907056447793603.post-44161101181440845482011-03-22T21:10:41.784+00:002011-03-22T21:10:41.784+00:00I don't really have anything to add, though I ...I don't really have anything to add, though I think that was a good call on Brian and Michael's part. It's an impressively diverse list of accomplishments, but it makes we never did really hear here how that one man show went.Did we?seana grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774794086733027289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-160907056447793603.post-60031383986548997312011-03-21T19:35:24.390+00:002011-03-21T19:35:24.390+00:00Brian and Mike - Thanks a million for your respons...Brian and Mike - Thanks a million for your responses. I'll make that change before I use it. <br /><br />Much obliged<br /><br />gbAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-160907056447793603.post-14353526548516532282011-03-21T15:39:06.258+00:002011-03-21T15:39:06.258+00:00I was gonna make the same point as Brian. Other th...I was gonna make the same point as Brian. Other than that it's pretty clear and, more to the point, VERY impressive. I keeps me some illustrious company. :)Michael Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14362324064346137974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-160907056447793603.post-18313097326086317672011-03-21T14:14:03.212+00:002011-03-21T14:14:03.212+00:00I would change
"He read a collection of my ...I would change <br /><br />"He read a collection of my short stories and helped me improve each one over six one-to-one sessions."<br /><br />To <br /><br />"He read a collection of my short stories and helped me improve each one over a series of one-to-one sessions."<br /><br />The number of sessions isn't relevant and for an inexplicable reason it irks me. <br /><br />Otherwise sounds good to me.Brian Lindenmuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02519203797661128049noreply@blogger.com